I'm a poet and I don't know it... (that doesn't really work written down!)

Today we were writing poems in English. Here was my group's effort (changed a little bit...)

Once i saw a little star

Twinkle twinkle in the sky

The brightest star I'd ever seen

But it was all alone

I wondered had he lost his mummy,

Maybe playing hide and seek

Could it be that he had wandered

Right across the galaxy?

The star's sweet smile seemed to fade

As glittering teardrops fell from the sky

One fell into my hand, I looked right up

The star was just above me

'Why are you crying little star?'

I asked him very gently

He sobbed and then he spluttered out:

'It's because I'm afraid of the dark!'

Awww...!